Rose in Chains The Evermore Trilogy 1

lack of worldbuilding and character development

Johanna aus Bamberg am 15.07.2025
Bewertungsnummer: 2539929
Bewertet: Buch (Gebundene Ausgabe)

As someone who’s only read the first four Harry Potter books, I came into this published Dramione fanfiction with limited background knowledge. Unfortunately, that gap proved to be a major hurdle. The author, Soto, seems to assume a deep familiarity with the original series and its characters, leaning heavily on backstory and character dynamics that simply aren’t explained or developed within the book itself. Instead of building a self-contained narrative, Soto invents a backstory that felt disjointed and confusing. There was little effort to ground new readers or give existing ones fresh insight. If you're not already emotionally invested in the original Hermione and Draco, the book doesn't do much to make Briony and Toven (this version’s main characters) stand out on their own. They came across as flat, lacking distinct traits or meaningful arcs, and the tension between them (clearly meant to carry the story) never really landed for me. Pacing was another issue. The plot dragged in several places, often stalling to focus on interactions that didn’t push the story forward or reveal anything new about the characters. Add to that a few concerning moments, particularly scenes that involved thinly veiled homophobia, where a character is ridiculed for his sexuality, and my experience became increasingly frustrating. And then there’s the length. The book is simply too long for what little substance it offers. With more editing, deeper character work, and a broader consideration of its audience, this could’ve been much stronger. But as it stands, I can’t recommend it to readers who aren’t already Dramione fans; and even then, some might take issue with its tone and content.

Noch besser als "the Auction"! Jolie Sotos eigene Welt - ich liebs!

Bewertung am 02.10.2025
Bewertungsnummer: 2613939
Bewertet: Buch (Gebundene Ausgabe)

Jolie Soto hat aus "The Auction" ein tolles Werk fernab vom Harry Potter-Universum gemacht. Die Stimmung ist gleichgeblieben, das Werk ist unglaublich spannend! Unbedingte Leseempfehlung! Das Buch ist natürlich gespickt mit Rückblicken, anders wäre das Worldbuilding nicht möglich. Die Welt und die Mechanik der Magie ist toll gemacht und logisch. Achtung, dieses Buch ist ein Slowburn und enthält noch wenig Spice. Das wird sich aber beim nächsten Band ändern, da kommt um einiges mehr. Ich freu mich drauf. Ich warte jetzt schon sehnlichst auf den nächsten Band!